Falling Back to One

Falling Back to One, by Randy Mason, is an eye-opening examination of the juvenile detention system and of authority figures who have their own unhealthy issues. It is a well-written and compelling narrative, but for this reader, seemed to move too slowly until the final chapters. Set amid the social changes of the seventies, is the relationship between a troubled cop and a severely damaged child.

Frustrated with the legal and judicial system, James Baker dropped out of law school to become a police officer. Detective Sargent Jim Baker has anger management issues, is again frustrated with the system, and is at risk of losing his career. His only chance to redeem himself is to become the legal guardian of Micki Reilly, a brilliant and talented, but also severely psychologically damaged young woman being physically and sexually abused at a juvenile detention home for girls.

The first two-thirds of the book is about Micki’s repeatedly defying Jim, or not trusting him enough to explain why she did or did not do something. Of course, rehabilitating someone as severely damaged as Micki is always two steps forward and one step back, over and over again. Juxtaposed with her behavior is Jim’s repeatedly handling this by backhanding her or throwing her against a wall. Micki and Jim need each other, but refuse to acknowledge it. It was not difficult to figure out that Micki was a victim of kiddie porn and physical abuse, but Jim was clueless.

Enrolled in high school, and given a less-than-minimum-wage job, Micki excels at both, but has not learned to trust; she hates Jim and his physical abuse of her. Jim, meanwhile, is simmering with anger at Micki, and devastated by the broken relationship with his would-be finance, Cynthia, which he blames on having to work with Micki. Despair rules the day for both Jim and Micki. It takes a near tragedy to turn things around for both. Another review called the book “fast-paced”. I found it very slow moving until the last few chapters.

What Made this Book Reviewer Grumpy?

Incomplete sentences:  “Alone with the rat.” and “Until her eyes adjusted.” and “As if they’d never existed.”  and “And finally slept.”

Improper verb usage:  “he wished he would’ve stayed” rather than the correct “he wished he had stayed”.

Improper word usage: repeatedly using “further” when most of the time “farther” should have been used.

Beginning a sentence with a conjunction:  “And still I worked…”  “And finally slept.”

Split infinitives: “…to fully mentor…” or “…to never have…”  “…to constantly be…”

 

 

 

6 Responses to Falling Back to One

  1. Kim Miller says:

    Sounds like an interesting book.

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  2. This sounds depressing. I hope it’s fiction.

    Liked by 1 person

    • It is fiction. It’s a dark novel, but not truly depressing. It reinforces my believe that not everyone is suited to the career paths they choose, and that we must be gentle with children so we don’t create damaged individuals.

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